Monday, July 14, 2014

Limerick.13. To Have Or Not To Have Comments

Rating: 5.0

He knew it would be trouble having a wife
But being single would be double strife
So he married a lady
Whose reputation was shady
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Valsa George
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Irfanulla Shariff 03 October 2018

Great humorous poem, brilliantly crafted! You have done it again! Thanks for sharing, Valsa…10+.

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Ntsako Manhisa 02 October 2018

Alas! As cat and rat they lived their life Wow, you got me laughing there.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 August 2018

Whose reputation was shady Alas! As cat and rat they lived their life.........amusing lines. A beautiful limerick with humor nicely presented.10

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Mj Lemon 02 February 2017

Valsa, it is often said that opposites attract. I think here, in this gem, you give the reason for why that's often so. A great poem.

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Bill Cantrell 05 November 2016

While the cat is away, the mice will be rats but if one is already a rat, he deserves the cat, a nice witty poem you have penned

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Valsa George 05 November 2016

Enjoyed your comment Bill.... Thanks!

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Akhtar Jawad 06 March 2015

PH liked my comment and gave me 25 points. Thanks.

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Akhtar Jawad 06 March 2015

Lovely truth but that is the story of most of the rats.....................10

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Khairul Ahsan 09 August 2014

Fantastic! Enjoyed this limerick very much. The last line tells it all.10/10.

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 July 2014

A fantastic write on reality. Loved it.

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Very funny coupled with truth and wisdom............Valsa...........enjoyed a lot.....

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Dinesan Madathil 15 July 2014

Marriage is a necessary evil... It`s like having a phone connection - having one is both useful and inconvenient.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 15 July 2014

love this humorous take Valsa.

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Kirti Sharma 15 July 2014

again... a wonferful poem! i like it! ! : D

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