Limerick # 11 Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Limerick # 11

Rating: 4.2


My heart is fit with your sight of naughty
O beauty you are mine or God's poetry
Love is disheveled wine
Gun or sword all are fine
Ring will arrest your finger heavenly


- May 29,2018 Chittagong

Limerick # 11
Tuesday, May 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Britte Ninad 29 May 2018

wow fine penned sight of naughty - anti climax! and God's poetry climax! superb love 10+++

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 August 2019

Oh beauty you are mine! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 June 2018

A beautiful poem of love. Lovely and passionate thoughts. Liked the last line. An amazing line.10

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Akhtar Jawad 19 June 2018

Enjoyed the ring arresting the finger, let it be tried on the charge of love. Don't plea guilty on the first hearing of the case in a court of nature.

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Ruby Mostazir 12 June 2018

Ring will arrest your finger heavenly! sounds interesting

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Muzahidul Reza 10 June 2018

Ring will arrest your finger heavenly, this has made your limerick more funny,10

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