Sunday, May 20, 2018

Limerick-1: Railway Minister's Freak Comments

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There was an old man who became Minister for rail,
Many thought, at sixty seven he was weak and frail.
But he proved everybody wrong,
Proved that he was still so strong!
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Khairul Ahsan
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Sheikh Shadi Marjan 28 June 2018

Ha HA HA... excellent! ! !

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Khairul Ahsan 21 July 2018

Thank you, @Sheikh Shadi Marjan.

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 June 2018

Wow... Interesting Limerick. God bless the family! ! !

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Khairul Ahsan 21 July 2018

Thank you @Geetha Jayakumar, for your appreciation.

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Unwritten Soul 27 May 2018

Life has different plan for each of us, either late or soon happiness or contentment will be ours, May God bless us and make us never sad in every angle of life by giving us hope and wisdom, A nice poem Khairul Ahsan!

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Khairul Ahsan 20 July 2018

Thank you, @Unwritten Soul, for reading this limerick and leaving your thoughtful words here. Much inspired.

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Akhtar Jawad 21 May 2018

He was 67 and I am only 63, I wish I could be railway minister in Pakistan. Enjoyed your poem.

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Khairul Ahsan 22 May 2018

Ha ha ha, I wish so! Keep your bride ready! , @Akhtar Jawad! !

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Mihaela Pirjol 21 May 2018

A great limerick on the subject.

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Khairul Ahsan 22 May 2018

Thank you, @Mihaela Pirjol, for your inspiring appreciation of the poem.

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Kostas Lagos 20 May 2018

Never too old to rock 'n' roll! Nice limerick!

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Khairul Ahsan 20 May 2018

@Kostas Lagos, it's truly so! Appreciate your comment.

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Valsa George 20 May 2018

Wow........Beautiful limerick.....! The old Minister is so productive though he appeared weak and infirm! Appearances are so deceptive! .......Confirmed once again!

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Khairul Ahsan 20 May 2018

He got married (for the first time, of course) at the of 67, became father of a daughter at 69 and of another two (twin) sons at 71. The couple looks very happy with their three children. Thanks for reading the limerick and sharing your thoughts, @Valsa George.

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Rajnish Manga 20 May 2018

By any yardstick, this is an outstanding Limerick. Well-structured.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 May 2018

Thank you very much Rajnish Monga, for your generous appreciation of my first effort at writing a limerick. Much inspired.

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Rajnish Manga 20 May 2018

Oho Ho! ! What a lovely transformation in personal life of the Railway Minister and his latest muse. Now he can have more time for his official assignments. Humour personified. Loved it, Friend.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 May 2018

Dear @Rajnish Monga, Thank you so much for reading this limerick and leaving a comment her. I am glad to have your thoughts.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 May 2018

Inspired by Akhtar Jawad's limerick-'His Story', I promised five days ago that I too would try my hand at writing one. Happy to say, I've posted my first limerick today, titled: Limerick-1: Railway Minister's Freak.

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 May 2018

Strong enough to teach others! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 May 2018

Thanks for the comment, @Edward Kofi Louis. Like all other poets here, I too am pleased to share my poems with the readers of this site.

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Britte Ninad 20 May 2018

Absolute words about BD Railway Minister Mr. Mujibul Haque nice 10+++

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Khairul Ahsan 20 May 2018

Thanks @Britte Ninad, for your comment and the generous rating of 10++

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