Limerick #1 Comments

that was a going limerick. better then mine if i wrote one. good job! ! ! ! : -D

interesting...somehow, it reminds me of the mad hatter and the rabbit (whose name i forgot) in alice of wonderland...also you'd might like to note that the last word of the fifth line in a limerick, by standard, should rhyme with the last words of the first and second line...but if you don't want to change it, it's fine as it is. it is, though, very difficult to write a good limerick, or one that follows the rather stiff rhyming scheme. good try