I thought I would live forever, like Newton or Shakespeare-
Until you were gone I realized you were my life’s elixir,
I tore your heart to pieces yet it is mine that is torn-
Numbed, suffocated, mutilated, annihilated-
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your limbo... you totally expressed what you feel... its great... great words... are you male or female. Dou you have something like friendster
This is an amazing poem! I like how well the words just flow, and how you seem to tell a story with the poem. Very well done.
like it loads! good stuff.