Sunday, April 29, 2007

Lily's Silent Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

Each night Lily lay down her weary head
She pulled her pillow closer
Turned her face buried it deep as it soaked up all the silent tears
She cried, she begged,
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Leila Kay
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Malini Kadir 23 May 2007

To find words to express i have not........but it has touched my heart

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Nyrical Poet 04 May 2007

Such a wonderful, yet sadden story. I can relate so much in the fact that I have lived that same situation. Thank you for sharing, it is a well deserved 10! ! ! Always, Nick

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Duncan Wyllie 29 April 2007

Oh so sad..this one, but I think you have put it very well He reached out and touched her Soothed her healed her loved her Her days filled with warmth Her nights filled with moonlight and love Wonderful lines Leila Take care Love duncan X

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 29 April 2007

To love in vain, is there ever a greater pain... Leila.. A fine poem here lady, a ten from me... andy x

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