Tuesday, May 13, 2014

Lily Of The Valley Comments

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Three times within a single day
Straying out of your usual way
To pass lily of the valley
En masse in a garden's gulley -
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Susy Evelyne
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Maria Gonzalez 01 August 2015

A picture painted very well Susy.

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Paul Reed 16 June 2014

Brilliantly written, I love the phrase 'grey shower-splashed stones'

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Valsa George 09 June 2014

A host of lilies like Wordsworth's Daffodils continue to entice us and no wonder if someone takes a stroll to the Garden's gully many times a day to feast on that sight....! Beautiful poem! !

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John Brown 13 May 2014

A lovely poem. I like Lily of the Valley flowers too. I've also learned a new word: clochette - neat.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 13 May 2014

beautiful poem, a delight to read!

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Susy Evelyne

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