Lily Of Sacrifice Comments

The Lily of Sacrifice. This poem is another true one. I know I can relate to this one. It's true- no matter how kind you are to people in this society, no one seems to care- and its such a shame. It's real beautiful work though, and the title is great.

A person who sacrifices for others is really a true gallant........but its one of the unfortunate dilemmas of the modern world that people don't acknowledge your sacrifice and that is how it is.........we should also have a to the point approach towards this self-centered world............regards

Commendable work, Leslie. This piece is mellifluous in structure, as it glides as smoothly as a new coin tossed 'coss an icepond....Well Done! ~FjR~ -2008-