Lily Bird Comments

Happy New year sir.....this poem is really beautiful.

Oh to be trapped in love - where else would we want to be. Not with crocodiles! Wonderful poem, thank you for sharing x

Beautiful poem. Well written. Im tired of typing. Its always growing away. Crocodile under moss wow...nice poem

Good evening sir, A very beautiful poem about love. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem

A lovely poem of love and passion. Thanks for sharing.

Very romantic and beautifully penned one.... Congrats! Thank you for the poem being shared.... pc

Turned into a lily bird I love to run on your Beautiful soft petals, love so strong

Always there are crocodiles hiding in the swamp. And we get trapped in our own storied, lest we get swallowed by the crocodiles. A five star rating for this gem.