Saturday, November 4, 2017

Lily And Her Moon- 04: The Separation Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the moon sets

In the horizon
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Suratha Kumar Rout
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Rajendra Rout 13 November 2017

She bids a good bye And returns back into Her old costumes Pale, lorn with tear Gloomy, swollen eyes And shrunk petal lips The sad princess With a broken heart.lovely line shairing.......10++++for it

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Suratha Kumar Rout 28 January 2018

Rajendra nice comment. Thanks

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Rajendra Rout 04 November 2017

suratha i enjoy your poem.thanku suratha for shairing this lovely poem....10++++++

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Suratha Kumar Rout 28 January 2018

Rajendra thank you so much

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