Mind hazy, clouded, misty,
Clean it, wipe it,
Then, with a twist,
Leap! Out of the fist!
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Yes, very true. Indeed our mind need ti be cleansed, often. So aptly written short poem. You deserve 5 stars..
Short and succinct yet with high meaning in great depth....liked it...full score
Brilliantly expressed dear madam... just fabulous.5 stars.
So so i spiring. Need this cleaning often as our heart tend to get foggy often. Beautiful poem.
I can just picture it happening, very special ending to this part, very intelligently conceived, the reader really enjoys that sudden twist,5 Stars full on Top, fully awarded, Dr. Geeta!