Monday, October 17, 2011

Lilly Comments

Rating: 4.8

I saw
my mother today
under a mystical
Coloured rainbow
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Dave Alan Walker
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Brenda Urka 21 February 2012

Very sweet, pen to paper, words to rhyme, amazing.

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Tsira Gogeshvili 24 November 2011

Very lovely poem.... as mystical really is possible to be feeling under or through the rainbows....10.. All the best Tsira

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Ronel Mccarthy 23 November 2011

Hi Dave I'm Ronel from South Africa. Thanks for commenting on my poems. I enjoyed and identified with your poem Lilly. I think those who pass on let you see them when you are ready and worthy to do so-it brings peace and calm into our lives.

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Sai Ram Potukuchi 10 November 2011

Hi. Dave, Truly speaking, That smile is graceful and precious enough to invite noble souls. wonderful presentation of a great feel in simple words.

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Sai Ram Potukuchi 10 November 2011

Hi. Dave, Truly speaking, That smile is graceful and precious enough to invite noble souls. wonderful presentation of a great feel in simple words.

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Aprajita Rana 07 November 2011

Beautiful.............

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Cathy Yancey-serna 07 November 2011

Its sad cause shes dead, its spiritual and touching when she comes back to see her grandbaby smile I like it

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Shamba Kaunda 06 November 2011

This poem has and its beating..i love it

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Ben Burger 24 October 2011

Your poetry speaks to me, I don't know why? but it's amazing. Keep up this talent

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Ency Bearis 20 October 2011

Awesome poem, heartfelt cogitations.

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Jinal Oswal 19 October 2011

Aha, it is wonderful..: D

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sandy endy 19 October 2011

nice poem i like it very much

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Jacqui Broad 18 October 2011

Let me get this straight - if your mother came to see her new granddaughter, that would mean you have a new daughter, right? So can I say congratulations?

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Stefanie Fontker 17 October 2011

How very beautiful. This will remain in my heart. Thank you for this burst of emotion within me that you have inspired.

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Elizabeth Grace 17 October 2011

AH! This seriously brought tears to my eyes. This is absolutely beautiful.

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Sonali Sings 17 October 2011

As i read your poem i had goose flesh, as if i could feel an eternal soul. God bless!

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Eric Cockrell 17 October 2011

love this one... and yes, those that have gone before, still care!

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Unwritten Soul 17 October 2011

Again it was wonderful past echoes as into...It nice and Oh beautiful, soul got new niece now? should be nice smile like a cutie lilly...I am happy_Unwritten Soul

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Dave Alan Walker

Pudsey, Leeds
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