I saw
my mother today
under a mystical
Coloured rainbow
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Very lovely poem.... as mystical really is possible to be feeling under or through the rainbows....10.. All the best Tsira
Hi Dave I'm Ronel from South Africa. Thanks for commenting on my poems. I enjoyed and identified with your poem Lilly. I think those who pass on let you see them when you are ready and worthy to do so-it brings peace and calm into our lives.
Hi. Dave, Truly speaking, That smile is graceful and precious enough to invite noble souls. wonderful presentation of a great feel in simple words.
Hi. Dave, Truly speaking, That smile is graceful and precious enough to invite noble souls. wonderful presentation of a great feel in simple words.
Its sad cause shes dead, its spiritual and touching when she comes back to see her grandbaby smile I like it
Your poetry speaks to me, I don't know why? but it's amazing. Keep up this talent
Let me get this straight - if your mother came to see her new granddaughter, that would mean you have a new daughter, right? So can I say congratulations?
How very beautiful. This will remain in my heart. Thank you for this burst of emotion within me that you have inspired.
AH! This seriously brought tears to my eyes. This is absolutely beautiful.
As i read your poem i had goose flesh, as if i could feel an eternal soul. God bless!
love this one... and yes, those that have gone before, still care!
Again it was wonderful past echoes as into...It nice and Oh beautiful, soul got new niece now? should be nice smile like a cutie lilly...I am happy_Unwritten Soul
Very sweet, pen to paper, words to rhyme, amazing.