Monday, November 24, 2008

Lillian, Ugandan Girl Comments

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I never saw her,
Only her words
Perfectly formed in ink on the paper.
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Mines Yours
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Ramdas Bhandarkar 14 July 2012

beautiful poem, like it, Thank you!

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Bill Thomas 03 December 2008

I agree with Paul: perhaps it's the whispering of her name & the praying for her that convey your love for her. Superb, anyway!

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Paul Hansford 01 December 2008

This piece is strangely moving - moving, that is, but I don't know why. Lovely.

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