Lilith Comments
I was created from the earth
Just like him but before him
The first woman the first wife I am
As equal I didn't bow before him.
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A well crafted, 'interesting' poem with a fascinating narrative. The sort of poem that demands a 'google' search to find out more. You use words very effectively and economically to pick the eyes out of your story and leave the reader knowing more than they imagine. I am enjoying your work. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
'Drown me in the water if you can! ' But they didn't dare to test me well penned....voted 10..
The poem is like the depth of ' pacific cliff '.Words are as fresh as morning garden.Good job Marton.
My skin is like the avid moon My hair the crawling snakes of fire Only death spreads from my womb On your tomb I will carve desire what a sweet stanza...enjoyed your whole poem..meaningful one..10/10
My skin is like the avid moon My hair the crawling snakes of fire Only death spreads from my womb On your tomb I will carve desire. well poetic words, , , , , , , , , .cheers with 10+++++
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7/23/2025 9:37:29 AM # 1.0.0
What a wonderful, but brief spin on Lilith, the first mythological wife of Adam.