Lilith Comments

Superbly constructed and beautifully written. Thank you for sharing this. I know of Lilith my late mother taught me. My magnificent teacher and she would have enjoyed reading your beautiful poem. So I thank you from myself and my late mother. Take care.

Not this time Lillith! ! ! What a beautiful poem and Lullaby. Enchanted by the melodious rhythm! ! ! !

We all fall from grace from time to time. We get to climb back up, perhaps not so for Lilith. I loved the gentle cadence of rhyme that permeats this dark allegorical poem.

Lilith's hardness captured in soft lilting stanzas.

Magical! Don't think it matters whether you know anything of Lilith or not. This is a beautiful in it's own right. Dawn xxx

Both beautiful and tragic as the story of Eden goes, nicely written Valerie......

We shouldn't bow to dark entity.The mythological story of Lilith has been used beautifully.An allegorical poem.

love this poem... have always been intrigued by Lillith!

Another beautiful poem, mystical, such a pleasure to read.

This is a classical style with some nice use of older language to give that character as with the use of repetition drawing the reader from the beginning to the closure to reinforce the sentiment and air or other worldliness, spiritual.

Wow, this is beautiful and unearthly (in a good way) . One of my favorites for all time.