Thursday, September 8, 2005

Lilac-Girl Comments

Rating: 4.2

it seems that I hardly know you
but where you are I want to go too
how can I just let you disappear
to not have you near in future years
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Tears In Rain
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Marcy Jarvis 25 September 2005

wow, I would marry the guy who wrote a poem like this for me.

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Amberlee Carter 09 September 2005

I love lilacs..them and bleeding hearts are my favorite.. This is a lovely poem, a very heartfelt tribute to someone close to your heart...may your pain lesson, and your joy overwhelm you.... Always, amberlee

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Lylyanna Pilewski 08 September 2005

Awesome completely! Lylyanna

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Raynette Eitel 08 September 2005

Nice image, heartfelt emotion. Good work. Raynette

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A Harrie 08 September 2005

Beautifully written, the emotion flows, great poem Amanda

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Mary Nagy 08 September 2005

I absolutely LOVE the nickname you've given your 'lilac girl'. Since lilacs are my favorite flower, I think it is so....sweet how you call her this. Very touching poem. Sincerely, Mary

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