Sunday, September 11, 2011

Lilac Comments

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Soft and pale in colour,
Embraced by Mother Jupiter,
Let us ride into the sun.
Saturn will not remember,
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Stefanie Fontker
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Fool Of Forgiveness 11 September 2011

hmmm.... this one is nice, ..... i like space too, it's one of my favourite subjects.... but this only uses it for a metaphor.... which is lovely :)

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Allemagne Roßmann 11 September 2011

Shades of blue well painted...

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Unwritten Soul 11 September 2011

So universal feeling here...Believe or not you was using my favorite and interesting subject...and it used very nice in this work...Think this poem has it ring persona too like the planet has.. :) _Unwritten SOul

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