I hear your crisp tears
Clambering up the throat cliff
While you are eating.
Why you are so queer,
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it has a dreamy charm, a laid back and relaxed tempo. the colors of nature and a celebration of a swan dance makes for lovely reaning like a careless meander along a misty gorge.... :) cheers
I enjoyed reading your poem.Go on writing. Yoseph