Lil Wayne, The Poem Of.... Comments

Thanks for your suggestion Frank, it is God's given talent that is why I used 'His talent.' That means He can take it away if not used properly.

I like this poem. There are a lot of talented people out there that our talented and do care or even understand the effect that they have on poeple. This is why I like this poem. There is one thing that you may want to edit in your poem. Instead of putting His talent, try putting (your) talent. This would be more appropriate because Lil Wayne not using his talent for God. How could you go against Him with your talent? How could you misuse His name with your talent? How could you be so sexual with your talent? How could you serve a worldly god with your talent?