Tuesday, May 17, 2016

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I wish I wasn't left feeling so much
Every time you leave
Even when I feel like I'm in control
With time it becomes overwhelming, realizing you hold too much power
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Leah Ayliffe
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Mike Smith 23 May 2016

Love is a drug. Every bit as addictive a compound as any other. You express yourself so perfectly (exquisitely might be a better word because it has an element of precision to it) . When I see poems like this I always wonder what the muse would make of them if he or she ever were to read it. Love poetry is so hard to do well. You make it look effortless. Your heart poured itself out and materialized as a fascinating and stunning piece of writing.

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