Monday, April 9, 2007

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It'll happen like this:
My hand will tremble as I
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Francis Santaquilani
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Chuck Audette 16 May 2007

Liked this! (haha) Especially the line about the fly washing its hands. I enjoyed the clock-ticking-like pacing to it. I have a similar (?) poem you might enjoy - 'Just Desserts and Final Judgement'. I'd welcome any comments you'd care to leave. -chuck

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