Friday, January 16, 2015

Like The Wind Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just as the wind blows forward by slightly swirling back 
Gently to the past to brush through someone's hair who remembers a time where another's hand combed through his or her curls. 
I'm pushed to now, not then or when, seeing as the sea is violent and in love with constant motion
As am i
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Sandra Feldman 19 January 2015

This poem is like riding in a rocket ship thru space and never wanting to get off. It takes the reader beyond the routine poetic blue horizon, it is that exceptional, beautiful and deep. It flows like the wind yet there is so much said in every line. I could go on and on, but now you, the reader will have to find out the rest by reading it, well worth your while. One of the finest and best poems I have ever read. I consider it an unforgettable Masterpiece. A poetic hymn to Freedom and Beauty.

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Leah Ayliffe

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