Thursday, January 28, 2016

Like The Smoke River Comments

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You want it,
I want it,
With the shades of love;
Able to see through the veils of joy!
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Edward Kofi Louis
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Edward Kofi Louis 29 February 2020

Love and art! ! Dreaming along. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always in your land.

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Savita Tyagi 28 January 2016

interesting and thought provoking analogy. Smoke in river is transitory. So can be our wants.

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Kelly Kurt 28 January 2016

Love can be veiled by the fear of the unknown. Joy may wait on the other side

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Edward Kofi Louis

Edward Kofi Louis

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