Dawn comes soft here:
Soft like the second kiss –
Long, deep & languorous,
Pale light and pastel land
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Ah - this is beautifully described and the reader can imagine easily the scenes set by your talented pen - - dawn comes slowly - a fine comparison to the 'second kiss' - - splendid imagery..... Fay
Beautiful, evocative and wonderfully simple. I can see this in a book of great modern poems. Nice one Tony.