Tuesday, September 8, 2009

Like The Second Kiss Comments

Rating: 4.5

Dawn comes soft here:
Soft like the second kiss –
Long, deep & languorous,
Pale light and pastel land
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Tony Jolley
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Kevin Wells 14 September 2009

Beautiful, evocative and wonderfully simple. I can see this in a book of great modern poems. Nice one Tony.

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Fay Slimm 08 September 2009

Ah - this is beautifully described and the reader can imagine easily the scenes set by your talented pen - - dawn comes slowly - a fine comparison to the 'second kiss' - - splendid imagery..... Fay

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