Friday, June 17, 2011

Like The Sand Comments

Rating: 5.0

Time is like the countless,
Tiny grains of sand—
Ever shifting beneath our feet.
Second by second
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Walterrean Salley
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Hans Vr 18 June 2011

Very good imagery. Comparing sand and time is vety appropriate. Well done, melodiously written. I like this poem.

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Walterrean Salley

Walterrean Salley

Savannah, Ga
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