Like The Returning Waves Comments

You do not strive to establish relations Like the returning wave who leaves a layer Of the oceanic species and her beautiful signs Can you not revive the deep love of mine? Good analogy of returning waves to explain your loved one's way of being with you. A romantic poem, lovely to read.

Very rich and interesting poetry here, well deserved tenner, Saqib, really enjoyed it!

Like the returning wave who leaves a layer Of the oceanic species and her beautiful signs Can you not revive the deep love of mine? Intense poetry I loved it! ! ! ! ! -10 anjali

good and touchy words. what comes form the heart touches the heart. thanks for sharing

Wrapped around my heart is a long reel Of memories, dreams like coral reef Heart felt passions and the love sessions The foaming waves and a great flair Beautiful imagery in describing your experience of loving relation to cherish the memories for all times.