From the sky!
Watching down! !
Like the eyes of the eagle! ! ! !
Viewing everywhere;
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5 Stars full for this brandnew amazing poem, dear Edward! To my Favourites! Thank you for sharing this Truth. Peace to you!
First, you don`t need so many exclamation points. They don`t make the verses any stronger.. Eyes everywhere watching means many beings watching. I think you don`t mean that. This poem needs much improvement.
An excellent poem! Thanks for sharing! !