Sunday, January 28, 2024

Like The Evening Moon Comments

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As the sun sets
and darkness falls
the evening moon rises
and fills our heart
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M. Asim Nehal
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Terence Craddock 30 January 2024

there is a soft beautiful serene melody in this poem, I love the way the first stanza builds into the imagery, 'Our dreams float in the sky, peacefully like kites In a quiet presence, with a cosmic thrill.'

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Deepak S S 30 January 2024

We take inspiration from everythigh around us. Good poem.

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If the night moon can tickle and make our souls fly up to it let darkness embrace our skies

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Terence Craddock 29 January 2024

our dreams can bloom radiant bright like the full moon in full bloom bright, dreams are a sweet nectar which fill the soul with joy delight, wait feed hope energy to dreams to future glow full moon bright

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Terence Craddock 03 February 2024

I wrote the poems 'Dreams Can Bloom Radiant Bright' and 'Feed Hope Energy To Dreams', inspired by the poem 'Like The Evening Moon', by the poet M. Asim Nehal and dedicated to the poet M. Asim Nehal.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 29 January 2024

Very beautiful Asim Bravo! ! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 29 January 2024

Excellent piece indeed..... wonderful to read.... thanks a lot...

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 January 2024

This is so beautifully inked. Moon is the inspiration and muse to us poets. Nice share. Thanks.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 January 2024

A beautiful tribute to the evening moon embellished with great images. Very inspiring.

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Pallab Chaudhury 28 January 2024

Beautifully painted one... Well done my dear! With best wishes/ PC.

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Gordon Walter 28 January 2024

For even in the dark night, you glow with all might, with a constant reminder to embrace the night.

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Nabakishore Dash 28 January 2024

Like the moon we walk---------- of our lives.Excellent comparison.

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