Like the cool breeze form the sea
You touch my heart and mind
You caress my body to sooth me
Thanks very much being so kind
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It's of course a meaningful poem. To my poem list. A belated felicitation is felt better than to skip congratulating
WOW! On the 29th of October submitted and on the 3rd of November chosen as Member Poem Of The Day, Hurray! CONGRATULATIONS being selected as Member Poem Of The Day, dear Tiku, loveliest worded and so perfectly said. Marvelous poem, I have enjoyed reading this time and again. Truly engaging. God´s Blessings.10
A wonderful poem, when peace flows into us it makes for a blissful life.
Very well crafted with beautiful words.....Really outstanding.........thanks for sharing......10+++++++++++
An elegant piece of work! Many congratulations for this beautiful poem being chosen as POD! (10)
Like the sweet song a bird sing Good alliterative device. Nice and melodic. Well done!
A marvelous poem that brings out the beauty and wonders of nature and the joy that it gives to mankind. Well crafted write. Congratulations !
Like a virgin stream! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
You have created a great poem Thanks for these inspiring stanzas, Yours truly
Thanks Poem Hunter for selecting this poem as the POD. Thanks everyone for reading and comment. Gratitude.
A beautifully crafted poem. Congrats on Poem of the Day.
CONGRATS, Got the opportunity to read again this wonderful poem.
You are the flower I am the bee Thanks very much for eternal bliss Tiku ji, this is a wonderful poem of such a positive assertion of a wonderful life. Heartiest Congratulations dear Poet. So happy to see you as the poet of the day....10
Life is enjoyable in this earth for the gift of Almighty above. The cool breeze from the sea, sweet songs of the birds, majestic formation of clouds, and virgin stream across a dale are some of his gifts those give us pleasure and peace. A beautiful poem so nicely executed. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
Like the cool breeze from(form?) the sea. There are some forced rhymes which disturb the rhythm of the poem.
Like majestic formation of clouds You infuse varied dreams in to me You are the rainbow in my life Thanks very much making me free- - - - - Love is both divine and earthly.It is felt in nature and in the heart.A wonderful poem of love, thanks for sharing.Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day !
YOUR COOL YET WARM YOU KNOW