LIKE TEARS IN THE RAIN
A map of tangled hair
A dirt smudged face
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Oh! I love the way you employed an exact Simile - Like tears in the rain, to drive home the essence of the poem. A lovely piece penned with insight. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
A grin that quickly turns to a laugh A trusting heart An image of a small child Too soon grown From childish whims.. all our memories. lost in time. a very fine poem. you lead me to my childhood. thank u. tony