Thursday, January 17, 2013

Like Teardrops For Chocolate Comments

Rating: 5.0

You know those salty choc muffins,
I gave to you to try?
They were sprinkled with my teardrops,
Because making them for you made me cry.
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Ruby Honeytip
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Aria Siren 14 February 2013

Hmm they say when food is made with love it makes it taste better...guess that means it tastes saltier ;) this is on my favourites list of yours. such a tender expression of love for someone, making them something with your own hands. i love the ending: I hope you're hungry Delcious poem.

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Titi Dale 21 January 2013

Wow, a great write, as always. Expressed greatly, your description detailed, what else can I say? Keep writing! Tiegan

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Stevie Taite 17 January 2013

This is just the most adorable poem. It made me cry too! I can imagine your thought process sparking whilst pottering in the kitchen! Just magic Ruby! My good friend always says my food is made with love! I bet yours is too! X x x x

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