Saturday, August 24, 2013

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I live next door
and i know you live next to mine
sometimes we meet
and i look at the floor
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 August 2013

Rightly wrote people kill whole life to say I love you but if life and thought is clear enough without if and but limpid crystalline must have said the word like a kid without waiting for the result/ this is one part paradoxically other part is we are unknown to our neighbour and we fear with next door as one is peeping other must be peeking...fear onto the security plays but destroy the humanity thank you

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Gajanan Mishra 24 August 2013

like star to sea, good write, thanks. Please read my poems and comment.

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