Like eagles in the cliffs,
I slept in the arms of my God.
Like sparrows in its nests,
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Your poems are beautiful prayers of the soul's yearning for the divine...Such a beautiful imagery..thanks for sharing
it is a great divine experience that you are trying to portray here. chattering and shivering in the presence of God
like sparrows you chattered to God. very good imagery. chattering to God... a beautiful way of saying that your prayer is intense. thank you
Dear theodore your poem is very tuching.It is very good. grace
Like sparrows i chattered in the presence of God. very fine. it gives consolation when i read it.
liked the way you used our winged friends to express the power of divine...thanks
A classic poem! I loved the comparisons with the birds - my favourite beings The eagle, sparrow and the dove and the presence of the divinity in them. A full vote Tony.