Tuesday, February 17, 2015

Like Siberian Birds Comments

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Like migratory Siberian birds,
You flew many a thousand mile,
And settled in my orchards
To give me company for a while.
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Khairul Ahsan
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Edward Kofi Louis 20 July 2016

Back to your homeland. Nice work.

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Khairul Ahsan 30 April 2020

Thanks for appreciating, dear EKL.

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Valsa George 20 May 2015

Lovely write! The Siberian birds, to escape the bite of winter, come to warmer climates for an interim and fly back! Here I wonder if the bird is a metaphor! Someone came to share the warmth of your heart for sometime and left, leaving you lonely and love sick!

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Khairul Ahsan 30 April 2020

Thank you Valsa, for the thoughtful comment. The bird is of course a metaphor here, although the 'I' in the poem could be someone that I know.

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