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Oh captain! You know the mood! You have brilliantly captured the mood! Thank you

i love this: O :) it really is an emotional piece that truely came from the heart

We all have a room in our heart that someone we loved the most vacated. It is like losing a loved one and not being able to clean out the room they lived in, or removing their possessions, for fear we would forget them, and the feeling we had for them. But that vacant room is sometimes the ink that fills our pens and we write and we bleed. Always write what you feel, that is truth.

This poem explans how i fill some times very beautiful love it

A very good poem, full of feeling.

Serious theme, seriously handled in workmanlike way.

Your attempts at poetry are very well thought out but why not write about things other than yourself and the world may open out to you. Read many that are about other things and not just love and love lost. Read mine - Frustrated Plans - Adeline

really a great poem. I will remember it for the feeling of it.

I could feel some pain in here, I like the metaphor for the glass, and shards. Cutting like a cut heart.

Good write my friend...pick up your heart and go out again...and for the effort we'll give it a 10!