Thursday, August 17, 2017

Like Pets On The Earth Like Birds In The Skies Comments

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Sit on the earth like a faithful pet
and fly in the sky like the loyal birds
The pets and the birds fore see an earthquake.
Man feels it when the roof falls upon.
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Valsa George 19 August 2017

Unless a house is built on the strong foundation of love, life well not become enjoyable! We have to discern and foresee the warnings of Nature like animals and birds and take adequate precautions! A fine write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 August 2017

We have to learn many arts from even birds and animals. Every creature has special features within. Faithfulness can be learnt from pet and flying from bird. Generally man feels this while roof falls down but he should feel this truth earlier and carefully live in Earth performing good actions is right way. Residence made in matters becomes perishable in calamities like flood or earthquake but residence made in blessings and trust of God is spiritual residence and no natural calamity can destroy this. Such a residence is of course residence of wisdom. You have deeply observed life and penned this philosophical poem. This carries true observation. An excellent poem is shared here is marvelous....10

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Spiro Ujewe-zaz 17 August 2017

Nice! Nice conceit. Beautiful summary of contracting and sustaining family.

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