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wow, short and subtle yet i realy enjoyed the whole idea behind it

This is so clever- really! One of the most clever endearing poems ever. So I am not surprised that it was written by you; sometimes all the talent boils itself into a single thing, like it is being distilled..so this is like a fine onion wine..(smile)

Sonya, a great unravelling of the self with infinite llayers. Loved it. CP

like a search for self, you peel each layer discovering all that you are until you reach the core of your existence. you tend you garden well with words and you continue to grow as a writer

A very nice poem, Sonya! The metaphor of an onion you turn almost inside out in the last few lines: 'For you are finally seeing me while I'm undressing you' very clever!

Nice verse, subtle and clever it's also full of layered humour. Frank

......... Wow.......! ! !

Beautifully crafted layers of sentiment ending with a wry wink. This poem puts me in mind of Valentine by Carol Ann Duffy - onions rule! ! S ;)

You go girl! ! ! love this poems layers :) It has everything, subtle humor, sensitivity and a pinch of sensuality. Love it. Thank you for sharing.

Thanks for recommending this to me. But once again, you've shown yourself to be more courageous than me. Don't know if I'm capable of allowing anyone to peel away my layers. Lovely, though, really thought-out and honest, as always with your works. I loved it!

I think this is a very clever little poem: -) Another onion; -)))

Seeing through to find the you, lovely write............10

I love the way this just drips off the tongue....great piece.

Very provocative, An original mind is definately at work here. Excellent use of simile and imagery. Warm regards, Sandra

This is very creative and thoughtful.