Another day has come and gone,
Another sun has set,
Another wave has left the shore,
Now come the hours of regret
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Sadness, despair, a hollow feeling, no one to turn to comfort you...we all feel the ache. Well done Lora.
I love this poem and I can relate....sadly enough. It is filled with a yearning, as if your heart is burning... Thank you for sharing this filled with feelings poem.
Really captures the ache and desolation of lonelines....well done.
what sadness your words hold, what painful depiction of unending loneliness!
A lovely poem in its sadness. The parallels with the sunset and tide work well as a lead-in to the emotional heart of the poem. Perhaps writing of the loneliness helps to take its sting away a little? I hope so. You are not alone because many feel the same way.