Thursday, September 14, 2006

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When my life one day has gone
And the breath I breathe
From me moves on...
I wonder if you'll want me near?
...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Tailor Bell 15 September 2006

Larry, this is one your best IMHO...just brilliant work. -Tailor

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William Jackson 14 September 2006

Cool poem Lawrence. The ending is perfect!

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

Connecticut
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