Tuesday, September 10, 2013

Like Hearts In The Sand Comments

Rating: 5.0

Long were the nights
Walking hand in hand
Your skin touching mine
As we made love in the sand
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Serena Silenced
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Khairul Ahsan 11 September 2013

A wonderful poem, with vivid description.10/10. Passion is all consuming But on the other hand It washes away Like hearts in the sand Loved this stanza.

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Jayne Davies 11 September 2013

Great poem! Well done!

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