Thursday, February 15, 2007

Like He Was Seeing God Comments

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We took Papa to the infirmary
Unconscious and fading
Like a plantain tree left standing
After the fruit’s harvest
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Jason 3000AD
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Ifedayo Oshin 19 September 2007

i like the presentation of this poem; you make death look life, and give hope to seeminly hopeless situation. that should be one of the many goals of poetry well done!

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Oludele Adeogun 15 February 2007

adeleke, let me say i like the condour of your work.this particular piece is very objective and real.just keep it up brother.deleadeogun@justice.com

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