Friday, November 2, 2018

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The modern instant connects
Eroded relations most intimate.
The values once too precious
In the run became obsolete.
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Ratnakar Mandlik
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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 July 2019

Confusion and over stressing/Inherent with the shinning/Awarded by virtual reality/Has challenged even humanity....pragmatic expression! A wonderful work.....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 June 2019

I feel your concern, dear poet Ratnakar. Are we not experiencing the same thing here?

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 November 2018

It is really a superb poem having nice theme. Two lines of this poem touch me much and these are.... No need felt to understand In coal are hidden diamonds. Thank you dear Mandlik for sharing this gem.Full vote for you.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 November 2018

Over stressing! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 03 November 2018

Ratnakar, such a magnificent write.....10+++++++++++

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Practicing Poetess 03 November 2018

Ratnakar, a very good poem that makes its point that modern technology is dehumanising people. Well-written.

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Ratnakar Mandlik

Ratnakar Mandlik

Hyderabad(A.P.) , India
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