...Her complexity still lures suitors;
She goes through men like cigarettes
Savoring each puff
until her personality has burned them up
...
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Very nice... it's not good to smoke... and worse to get smoked...
this is amazing! really well thought out, love the simerlies!
Good stuff, but smoking seriously damages your health! ! ! ! I shall read some more of your work.
Fine poem, Ray. You told me once women were the only thing worth writing about. But don't ya love em?
I'm with Lyn! Great poem! Friends with a maneater are you? : -)
Hi Ray, do not like cigarettes but certainly LIKE your poem. Very clever. Curious if this is written with someone in mind.Thank You
Hey Ray, they all say they don't inhale, but you and I know better: P Love this piece, and hold my breath in readiness for your next offering x