Friday, April 10, 2009

**like Breeze Of Sea Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wave surged as it was building
The enormity of tide for the shore
Years after years it had washed down
Leaving marks of the undercurrents
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Karla Bardanza 10 April 2009

Sublime lines! 10++++

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Catrina Heart 10 April 2009

The gentleness of your breezee piece always caresses my rosy cheeks...........lovely! 10

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Indira Babbellapati 10 April 2009

the poem caressed me like sea breeze!

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