Saturday, August 31, 2024

Like Birds Without Nests.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

In fields of strife, where armies clash and part,
people wander around having torn from their heart
like birds without nests, they roam and seek,
a shelter from the storm, a place to speak.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Evelyn Judy Buehler 08 September 2024

I enjoyed reading this stirring and poignant poem. Well composed and powerful.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 September 2024

Full marks for this insightful poem, dear Asim ji. And to my favourite

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 September 2024

A search for the nest, a place to rest, however weary you still go on. Beautifully penned. A ray of hope never dies.

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Sandra Feldman 01 September 2024

So sadly but so beautifully writtee.1 It is always the innocent birds that pay the highest price in all wars. Only the leaders that provoke wars should be involved, , Highest marks for this then the cowasards would make wars stop.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 31 August 2024

Yet another bravo-worthy piece

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 August 2024

Fantastic poem, the words associate me with the refugees in our country. True fantastic, Dr. M. Asim Nehal. TOP Marks 5 Stars! Enjoyed tremendously having read your precious words

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