Thursday, July 2, 2015

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Bees are known for their sweet honey,
Bees are known for their poisonous sting.
Bees are known for their diligence.
When flowers dry
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Creative and compelling comparisons in this composition of yours my friend!

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Charity Nduhiu 16 July 2015

Nail on the head Dedan. I imagine if we had one queen being served by Hassan, Kamau and others, would we get any honey at all? I totally agree with you Dedan. Thank you for this.

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Phanice Wamukota 12 July 2015

Awesome piece! Lets buzz off.............

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Bharati Nayak 04 July 2015

Bees are hard working, have strong social values and collectively engaged in the beautiful work of identifying flowers and collecting honey.We should learn a great deal from these little insects for building strong society.Very well written poem.Thanks for sharing.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -10/10

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Kelly Kurt 02 July 2015

A very fanciful, metaphorical piece, Mtemi. Thanks for sharing. Peace

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