Thursday, April 6, 2017

Like An Army Comments

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night creeps through the trees
like an army stalking darkness

creatures of daylight vanish
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Barry Middleton
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Dimitrios Galanis 06 April 2017

One would like to see it as a prophesy that soon there will be a dawn for the evil spread over [the] countries.

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Barry Middleton 06 April 2017

I fear we have a very long way to go.

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Make Shift 06 April 2017

Great poem the opening lines are brilliant....reminds me of Yeats poem The Second Coming but your ending holds hope.

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Barry Middleton 06 April 2017

To be compared to Yeats is somewhat overwhelming. Thank you so much. I hope there is still hope but some days I am not so sure. I want it to be so.

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