night creeps through the trees
like an army stalking darkness
creatures of daylight vanish
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Great poem the opening lines are brilliant....reminds me of Yeats poem The Second Coming but your ending holds hope.
To be compared to Yeats is somewhat overwhelming. Thank you so much. I hope there is still hope but some days I am not so sure. I want it to be so.
One would like to see it as a prophesy that soon there will be a dawn for the evil spread over [the] countries.
I fear we have a very long way to go.