Sunday, March 25, 2012

Like A Worm In The Apple Destroys The Sweetness Comments

Rating: 4.8

Like a worm in an apple destroys the purity of this sweet fruit
Breaking the heart of your loved ones hurts you to the core of
your spirit and is a forever blight of purity to carry always
like a bag of tarnish loot.
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Mountain Pass
COMMENTS
Stan Petrovich 24 December 2012

I wonder what Dr. Freud would interpret this one. However, I for one, don't care because he was really nothing but a Viennese hotair balloonist. Good writing though....

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Owain Glyn 20 December 2012

Very profound, and possibly, very true.

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Barbara Nixon 19 December 2012

Beautifully wrrtten poem, love it!

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Adeline Foster 23 July 2012

Yes, expressing your feelings is indeed the purpose of poetry. Read mine – Death of Innocence - Adeline

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Shadow Girl 11 July 2012

Brilliant, meaningful write.

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Unwritten Soul 08 May 2012

I read it and i feel so good finished this, has a good idea, it is a good piece to understand in very easy and beautiful way really this poem such a good write write more! _Unwritten Soul

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