Wednesday, June 24, 2015

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Rating: 5.0

This simple rhyme I arranged, let me recite
I made it for you, I wrote it last night
it's kinda crazy and sounds like thrash
But I am hoping it can stir up such a fuss
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JR Cuyam
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Bud Taylor 14 December 2016

You wrote it last night what a delight!

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Grace Galeon 23 August 2015

Thank you buds! :)

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Cigeng Zhang 28 June 2015

A beautiful work.I liked the title Buds.

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Roseann Shawiak 26 June 2015

Your poem seems to be more romantic than friendly, but it's very enjoyable, depicts what friends should be like. Just watch your spelling. Great imagery! It's rhythm is like that of a rap song! Very good! Thank you for sharing and also for commenting on my poetry. RoseAnn

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Taylor Sharp 24 June 2015

this is really nice.

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Nishi Kumari 24 June 2015

nicely written....expresses the bond of friendship....well done..keep it up...

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Nishi Kumari 24 June 2015

Its a nice poem...totally expresses what friendship means...its open boundaries where a friend can share all his thoughts with another....liked it...keep it up..

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Soul Watcher 24 June 2015

An expressive words, and nice depiction, you said that you're hoping it can stir up such a fuss, actually it does. Thank you for sharing this poem.

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Phil Soar 24 June 2015

Enjoyable poem that identifies a relationship between to friends and shows how important it is to share our love and thoughts.

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Curtis Johnson 24 June 2015

This poem leaves me with a few questions. It refers to buddies, but it sounds romantic. I would not approve of using the 'A' word on this site. Otherwise, I liked the flow as it built upon the subject matter.

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