This simple rhyme I arranged, let me recite
I made it for you, I wrote it last night
it's kinda crazy and sounds like thrash
But I am hoping it can stir up such a fuss
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Your poem seems to be more romantic than friendly, but it's very enjoyable, depicts what friends should be like. Just watch your spelling. Great imagery! It's rhythm is like that of a rap song! Very good! Thank you for sharing and also for commenting on my poetry. RoseAnn
nicely written....expresses the bond of friendship....well done..keep it up...
Its a nice poem...totally expresses what friendship means...its open boundaries where a friend can share all his thoughts with another....liked it...keep it up..
An expressive words, and nice depiction, you said that you're hoping it can stir up such a fuss, actually it does. Thank you for sharing this poem.
Enjoyable poem that identifies a relationship between to friends and shows how important it is to share our love and thoughts.
This poem leaves me with a few questions. It refers to buddies, but it sounds romantic. I would not approve of using the 'A' word on this site. Otherwise, I liked the flow as it built upon the subject matter.
You wrote it last night what a delight!