Thursday, June 23, 2011

Like A Sparrow Comments

Rating: 4.5

Both the little sparrow & I will sometimes fall;
When we're hurt & trodden down by life's struggles,
Feeling defeated, alone like noone can hear our call,
Left to climb back up to sort out this puzzle,
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Jean Dament
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Tom Billsborough 05 August 2016

I love my Sparrows too. Their cheerful chattering always makes me smile. I hope the seeds and fat balls cheer them. Liked your poem. tom Billsborough

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 29 December 2013

Hello Jean. I have been away foe a while. I enjoyed your poem and the wonderful picture you provided. I wanted to thank you for your support of my poetry in the past. Hope you have a wonderful New Year! LOyd

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